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amortentiaaa 2007-10-12 . chapter 1
Cute ending. Well, isn't Narcissa the pretty little princess? :D Draco is so curious and intrigued at such a young age...
Miss Aconite 2007-09-24 . chapter 1
That line where Draco goes, "but... wansn't his beliefs bumb?" was the funnies thing I've ever read! Great job!
lucius'lover 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Fabulous story, nice build-up. The story was, perhaps, a tad over-long. It was worth it for the VERY EROTIC close. Is there a warm blooded creature on this globe who could possibly refuse the touch of the incredibly alluring Lucius Malfoy? - He might be bad but he is OH...SO GOOD!

As I would say to Lucius - More, Please, Don't Stop!
Look forward to reading more of your Fic.
Leather Splotches 2007-05-13 . chapter 1
I really liked this. It's good. It's just...
" 'Los Tomos Oscuros.' she assured him." (Note, this is just an example, it can be any dialogue sentence.)
It should be " 'Los Tomos Oscuros,' she assured him", with the comma instead of a period. At least that's how it is in the US of A. Dunno if it's different where you live.
-LS
crimson cyanide 2007-04-04 . chapter 1
Lol I always KNEW I loved Narcissa for a reason!
starbryte234 2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Amazing. Absolutely amazing.
Narcissa Raie 2006-10-16 . chapter 1
ahh loved it :-)
narcissa truely is a goddess, evil or not.
rockergurl13 2006-09-02 . chapter 1
oh my god. i LOVED THIS! seriously this was FANTASTIC! i absolutely adored your portrayal of Narcaissa and Draco and the whole story was just hysterical but in a very cool way. and the ending was so great. i really hope you write more since this is totally going on my favorites list!
Andromakhe 2006-07-14 . chapter 1
Fabulous. The characters were all so wonderfully drawn. I could imagine them so clearly. Draco's innocent questions were done very well, and the end of the scene at the tea room was simply side-splitting. Everything was so realistic, and I'm a sucker for any story that features a true Snape-Malfoy friendship. So awesome that Narcissa considered him worthy to marry, though I imagine in the long run, even if she didn't oppose Snape's Muggle blood, she and Lucius are a better match. It's clear enough that Narcissa still loves Severus as one of her very best friends, and that's always so beautiful to see. And Draco's adoration of Snape from the very beginning is clearly explained. Definitely going into my favorites.
Kenelfie 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
Beautiful. The portrayals of the characters, the situations, the imagery...All gorgeous. Not to mention, chibi-Draco was adorable. ^^
SlytherinGirl0220 2006-06-03 . chapter 1
omg! that was really really good! i loved how narcissa kept trying to explain to Draco why some witches and wizards don't like muggle-borns! that was hysterical! anyway... the ending was GREAT! great story!
Lizet M 2006-05-31 . chapter 1
Very, long, but nice story. I really, really, enjoyed it. I hope you write more, because I really like how you write about one of my favorite ships. And how you made Draco seem, well, sweet; even though he isn't! IMO, at least.
Narcissa B Malfoy 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
Oh wow!! I thought this was great! I loved the story line and how you portrayed the Malfoy's relationships with each other, and other people! Very well done! Hats off!
excessivelyperky 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
I want that dress! In red. With the gold corset. Or perhaps in green, with the embroidery and corset in silver.

Oops, sorry. Devoured by lust for the dress as I was (never mind the books, I think I saw them on E-bay...), I forgot to mention how much I liked the story. Yum!
too lazy to log in 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
aw, little draco was too cute. i liked this story, it was fuzzy and hahah-e.
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