you broke my heart again. So many times in one night, i'm afraid I'll never be the same. I'm only half kidding, but you did break my heart or rather Firiel did. It was suck a sweet and beautiful story. Again I love this family.

Wow, you've gone and made me cry, which is a rare occurance.

I love this bond you've created between Faramir and Firiel. She holds his heart in her hands.

Wow. This was VERY good!

Nienor

Cuteness, well written and sweet! Good story!

The image of Faramir sitting quiet and still while aware of everything going on is wonderful; he's putting his Ranger training to good use.

The image of Faramir weeping for all the years he hasn't seen Boromir, all the joyful events that Boromir never witnessed, including Firiel's existence, is sad but credible. Sometimes grief just sneaks up on us and takes us unawares. I do think Firiel was a bit young to come on the pilgrimage; but it probably would have been difficult to keep her from making the trip. It's so cute the way she prolongs the bedtime ritual...A very smooth little operator, that Firiel; but good for Faramir.

Nope. Sorry. Don't try to stop me. It's already too late. The deed is done. I've officially alerted all my readers to your stories! They are wonderful! Sat down and read (probably) all of the ones about Faramir's kids and such. There are only a couple I haven't read yet, but I saw the new ones posted and wanted to read the earlier ones first so I printed them all out.

So well written, and the characters are well defined. Just lovely. I keep feeling like I've given Elboron short shrift in my Elfwine Chronicles, but now that I've found your lovely series, I don't have to feel so guilty - he is well represented after all!

- Deandra

I really liked this story. It's a nice afterthought about what could have happened to Faramir. Please write more stories.

Touching and beautiful.Faramir obviously has a very special bond with his daughter.I think they are two of a kind.