hey that was the best snickers story i ever hear (read)lol and it was really funnie in the end the pregnant thing that was comical and wanna know somthing kinda weird my dad died in the war and my mom died after giving birth to my baby brother
so my aunt sara(her real name is Starfire) and my unkle nick
adopted me,my twin brother and my baby brother and my unkle nick has 4 kids:Cassie,Logan,george and kyle

*kisses feet, worships* Chloe, you are seriously amazing. This was beautiful! Well written, cute, funny, very believable, and the way you portrayed the characters was just perfect. And, I loved the ending. :P

Okay, let me compreyhend this...

Nick rubs Sara's back, takes off her shirt, takes off her other shirt, and then, and only then, you decide to tell us that their married. Way to give a girl a heart attac! I'm only thirteen you know! Question: are they having sex for the first time? That whole 'Truth was, she just wanted to experience Nick undressing her.' thing. Strange, very strange.

But I realy thiked your fic. I'm a real Snikers fan. Grillows if alright, but I really don't like Yo!Bling. I hate GSR with a paion. My sister and I agree, it is sick and wrong. Sandle is okay also. again, great fic.

-Lynn

P.S: are you sure you're not on drugs?

Very cute

SO CUTE!! I loved this story! Your Snickers stories totally rock my world!

Very sexy! The ending is hilarious. Loved it.

*shakes head vigorusly to sort out what was just read* Wh-wh-what!??!

Wallpaper!?!

Sex!?!?!

Eloped!?!?!

PREGNAT!?

oh wait no, she's not pregnat...

LEMONADE!?!??!??!?!?!?!?!

that was a funny fic...BUT WHERE'S THE SMUT!?

*blushes and sits back down, regaining 'good-girl' composure*

i-i- mean...that was an excellent book... :)

KEEP 'EM COMIN!

So nice! I loved it! You should add more chapters. Keep going

LOL that was cute really cute I wondered what happened to cath and warrick. Not really.

Really great chapter!

"whoa down girl" is all i can say...except for, i didn't know that you would take my advide and write something almost X!

Loved it, funny and great!! You should do a chapter before, when they were working at Greg's place...

Yay for Snickers! Very cute; I loved it. Especially how Sara shocked him with the pregnant line! LOL

FF is stupid. It "review-throttled" me even though this is my first review in a week. GR!

Haha, Catherine and Warrick disappearing together. :P

Nick's so thoughtful, making sure he doesn't take off both shirts. :P

Ahh, first make the reader wonder why he's just taking her shirt off like that, then the boom ending, hehe. Nice though, really like it ;) And also nice way of shocking Nicky with what Sara told him :P