i believe the saying is 'come into my parlor,' said the spider to the fly.

not to be degrading or anything... just so you know.

Hyper

Felled by a rotten tree! Oh the woe! I think I like Allie, she is very cute.

Very, very enjoyable story. Thank you so much for taking the time to share it. Generally I haven't read the stories told from one character's POV, but I found your story particularly engaging and the next think I knew I was hooked. Keep writing and we will keep reading...promise!

Wow- great story. Had me giggling! Loved it all.

I've just read your story in its entirety and I really enjoyed it. Love the fact that Atlantis took the form of a little girl to help John. And the ending was really funny. Typical McKay.

That was really good, loved the interaction between John and Atlantis and the way all the characters worked well together.

WOW, I loved this story! You did a great job and I hope there is a sequel ;)!

(applaud) A splendid tale. Look forward to your sequel.

What a wonderful story. Great whumping, snark, danger, adventure and the promise of a sequel. Yeah! Great job!

Delightful story. Loved the little tidbit about Elizabeth being a pitcher. :) I look forward to seeing how Rodney learns to interact with Allie and we learn more about the plot to kill John. Nice work!

Great story. I really enjoyed it. the humour was great, the action exciting, and Shep whump is always greatly appreciated. More please!

(paris stands up and cheers!)

whoo hoo that was awesome! and a sequel to! fantastic!

SQUEA! ANDROMEDA!hehe my fav show!

hehe another great chapter!

Thank you for an enjoyable read. Giving Atlantis a personality that they can all interact with (though not all of them can relate to) is a great idea - although I can see that getting a bit confusing at some point. I look forward to a sequel to see the ideas that you come up with.

great fic! :) I really enjoyed this and can't wait for the sequel...LOL - a tree? Of course - and only McKay could have been the cause of such an accident. :)