You are an amazing writer, you know that? I'm happy that you have updated and I can't wait until you update Fire and Light. This one sounds extremely good too. You rock! Keep on writing! ^^

I am very excited you're back! I am stoked to read more, you're one of the best fanfiction writers I've ever come across.

ITS A MIRACLE! this is lovely, darling. i'm glad you didn't give up on this like another author would at this point. i'm still working on your video, by the way.

Excellent! This chapter was well worth the wait :)

I like the use of first person here. Gives it a very autobiographical feel, a feeling of history, as if I'm reading the characters' memoirs.

The last scene left me with a dorky grin on my face. The brothers are back to their old antics, but it seems the antics in our world will be grittier and far more real.

And finally...could you provide a translation for the German? I'd love to know what Ed was saying :)

I feel I should stand up and cheer. The mistress has returned and she has just blown every other writer away, including me.

Sable-sama, you better update this one too! No fair only giving us an introduction! I want to see Ed propose to Winry! ( I read the profile explanation, XD) Bad! So update!

Sarif-sama you really need to get started on this story
please update it soon, please

I've heard of Eliot, but I'm not familiar with most of his work. That first poem was very poignant to this ex-Catholic girl; but I guess I'm waiting for the adventure to begin. Will this be as long as Fire and Light? Hope you aren't biting off more than you can chew.