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| palex 4ever 2008-02-01 ch 12,  | abuseplease update |
| issarged 2007-06-08 ch 12, | abuseI'm hoping this story is going to be updated. I really want to know what happens! Personally I'm hoping for Palex. |
| anonymous 2006-12-25 ch 12, anon. | abuseok i know i'm way late reading this & all but u r totally evil leaving that story on that last post. I want to read more! Anyways...ALL OF IT WAS GOOD. |
| SpySkater 2006-12-10 ch 12, | abuseYou're just now noticing, Ellie? PMS |
| icaughtfire 2006-12-09 ch 11, | abuseWhoa!! Craig is dead? Interesting twist. Very, very interesting. Wow. *blinks* Okay now an update would be nice. |
| Darkredeyes 2006-12-05 ch 11, | abusegreat...update...cant wait to see what happens...update soon |
| SpySkater 2006-12-03 ch 11, | abuseNO! CRAIG! COME BACK! And Manny, I know how you feel ('cause I feel it too), but he's gay. PMS |
| Karaki 2006-12-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseokay by chapter 10 your story got ten times better but i have questions about some of your ideas... |
| Karaki 2006-12-02 ch 7, anon. | abusewhat in the world galex ve you the thought of Elly the cutter and Alex the mixed up rebel. Come on how cheesy is a couple of drunk girls hooking up. When you get more reply. I think it is weird but I would probably get a kick out it. Put more thought into your writing... |
| SpySkater 2006-12-02 ch 10, | abuseI feel really depressed now. Alex is with Ellie while Paige is going through so much pain. It's good. I'm actually kinda ** at Alex and that's rare. PMS |
| Stellar Raven 2006-08-19 ch 9, | abuseThis story has an intiguing plot and good dialogue...the only suggestion I'd like to make is to use something to designate scene breaks, where the location and point of interest suddenly change. The way it is now, the reader is going through the story, enjoying himself, and then, whoops! Mis-paragraph, it's somewhere else. A bit confusing. |
| Daniela 2006-08-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseJust read all 9 chapters and I have to say your story's great. It also makes me think twice about who Alex should be with because I'm an avid Palex fan but I'm liking the Ellex too. Whatever you decide on I'm sure will be great just please update soon cuz I'm loving this. |
| missmiamya 2006-08-10 ch 9, | abuseI don't know if I've reviewed this story at all yet, but I know I've read a few of the chapters like two or three times...I like it...it's cute...I wonder if Marco is really going to move on or go back to Dylan?!...I wonder how Paige is goign to react to the whole Alex/Ellie thing. Paige and Alex shouldn't ahve resisted so much to begin with! but it's good...keep going! |
| DushkusBitch 2006-08-10 ch 9, | abuseBO. No ELLEX!! *goes away* |
| Darkredeyes 2006-08-09 ch 9, | abuseELEX...awesome...finally and update which is a great update by the way...anyways i like the elex pairings too and so...i hope you can update soon |