Great sequel to "Everything I've ever done", even though it turned out to be totaly different than I thought it would.
Interesting take on why Percy became Adam. An emotional rollercoaster. I love your writing.

Great story, like the one before :)

I liked the way you showed Percy's take on things and why he made his decisions; it shows the books in a different light.

I took my reading this one so I could relinquish the last bits of Everything

I've always liked Percy - maybe I identified myself a bit - but never enough to read something in his pov. I'm really glad I read this one. There were interesting arguments and a lot of emotional dealing, and I loved all of them.

"'Boo,' Severus said in his ear." - But I must say the thing I loved most was Severus and Neville's friendship. They make a great duo and I think you handle it magnificently.

Thank you!

This was a wonderfull read! I loved it secreatly hoping for you to write more focussing on the Snape family I LOVED there interadtions you grasp the crachters so well especially Snape

You always know you read a good story when it plays along in your mind as a movie, when you can see what is happening imagene it like that. I have been able to that with thus far all the story's I read written buy you.

You are a wanderfull talant I especially love this chapter it's funny becouse you feel completaly connected to the carachters AND the children. And at the same time it's smart and just just awesome I soo hope inspiration strikes to write about this foresome again. oh and percy/Adam's story needed to be told loved it too.

I must admit that your inclusion of Percy, I mean Adam, into the story had somehow made the story even more unexpectedly interesting. I love how you portrayed Ron as the lifelong-git he's always been (Bloody whiny, I hate it that Hermione ended up with him! Such a sad life for her) and Percy finally gets what he deserves all this while. The ending was just wonderful, with Harry and Severus finally calling it a truce. Good job!

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I've just skimmed the 1st story in this series and reread this one because it is just so wonderful. The work involved in extrapolating things from canon is visible in how real it feels (not to mention the footnotes, of course). This is one of those stories that allows the characters to move on to the level of wisdom that alas is not evident in the series, where apparently the ends justify the means and what is done by the good guys is automatically the right thing.

.This was such a great story! I am glad when you responded to my feedback that you mentioned it. I had seen the summary but am not a huge Percy fan so I hadn't planned on reading it. That would have been my loss. This was really a great story and I loved how you showed all the lessons Severus had leared over the years and also I LOVED their relationship. How terribly sad that he had not ever told her about the prophecy! I really enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Severus... very well done. Even the little things like Harry's nervous playing with the quill and Severus taking it away and repairing it. (I hate when people pick up my stuff and mess with it. I can totally see him just itching to snatch it out of Harry's hand.)

Thanks for sharing this and also for continuing the story. In a lot of stories I almost feel cheated... we went through all the *stuff* that it takes to get the couple together but don't get to see how they *are* together. This was a huge payoff to the other story. I really enjoy reading these two interacting together as a couple. I also loved Snape as *Dad*... so Snape yet with a touch of vulnerability and love.

Clare

Of course I wouldn't have dared to now read the sequel of a wonderful story. Although I expected a little bit more bickering from our favorite pairing, I think this story was absolutely wonderful; I've always liked Percy and it's great someone has done him justice. Thank you!

Ok, I'm done:)

I like sequel better than first story(maybe because Snape is here himelf). I see that your writing is better then it was. Maybe matter of time?

I like Ginny and Neville in this fanfic. I don't like both Ron and Harry. Understand Percy/Adam.

Just- so cool :)

"trying to find a way not to criticise" hah- poor Snape xD Children had learn that he's a human, not a bat xD Funny, really.

And thing that I like about this fanfic- Snape and Lilly are friends, not his love, not something more. And I like it.

Hmm... He's rather dull to understand this after 17years. And I don't believe Harry didn't tell him that before. But- that's ok :) I don't like trio not to be together.

"Or did he just say, ‘Ask your mother’?”" HAHAHA! That was awesome! I love Snape being a father! :} But I pity Callie and Cammy for having such a father. I hope that Ginny and Hermione could be still friends. And I like "friendship" between Snape and Neville.

Y... Poor Molly, she always is trying to find a good side of her children. I think that in such a big family everyone has to feel bad- Billy being eldest, Charlie always loosing to his brother, Percy-we know why, twins-joking and always compared to Bill and Percy, Ron-like twins but he has no such a talent and her mother was concerned about Ginny, Ginny- only daughter without really friendship. So much angst.

Now, as never, I understand how much Hermione fits Snape. She's too intelligent to be with hot-blooded and stupid Ron. All Weasleys are thick-headed(excluding Bill, Charlie little). And I don't believe Rons hate for Snape is bigger than his friendship and love for Hermione.

And where is Harry? O_o

But- I like sequel much better :)