 Eli-san 2007-08-18 . chapter 3 Great story! Interesting to read and very exiting! I liked Kio a lot and Saito was so funny, haha!
Lol, I laughed when Kenji said "Ko" to Kio... "Ko" means cow in swedish and... yeah, hehe!
Keep up the good work! |
 HauntedPast 2007-01-21 . chapter 4Sequal? Anything about Okita's sickness? |
 -little oro- 2006-12-22 . chapter 4I love this with a passion! Kenji is so adorable!
love -little oro- |
 Laegdin 2006-05-16 . chapter 4The idea of a toddler and a grumbling teenage Saito was inspired.
The descriptions of Kenji's antics were so realistic-sounding, and Saito and Okita's teasing and tormenting of each other was so typical of teenage boys. ^_^ And the WAF moments between Saito and Kenji were so cute.
Sano as the son of the chief of police! I burst out laughing when I read that. |
 mei-chan 2006-05-08 . chapter 4 GOOD JOB! You did really excellent. It was a great ending. |
 nannon 2006-05-08 . chapter 4 very nice story |
 SaitouuRyuuji 2006-05-08 . chapter 4This was an awesome chapter. I don't know if you do but it would be very awesome to read about Kenji in his growing up years with Saitou, Okita and Master Kio. I don't know if you plan on doing that but I think it would be awesome. :D oh and by the way i'm going to try to get my 2nd chapter up i've been so swamped with school and now that school is almost over I can work on stories again. Ja ne.
~Saitouuryuuji~ |
 Cavalyn 2006-05-08 . chapter 4So its over, it was a very good and enjoyable read. And i didnt mind at all that the Kenshin gang had such a little part. I really liked how you incorporated Saitou, Okita, Tokio and Kio as a family along with Kenji, and seeing Saitou becoming so protective of Kenji was so cute.
Well done on an excellent story.
-Cavalyn. |
 SaitouuRyuuji 2006-05-07 . chapter 3This was a really good chapter. I was on the edge of my seat once Saitou had been hit on the head and when I read this chapter my stomach felt like it had butterflies in it. Not the nervous kind though, whenever something like this happens it means that I really am getting excited. It was what I was expecting. I'm also glad that you are putting Kenshin in the fanfic. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
~Saitouuryuuji~ |
 someone out of the blue 2006-05-07 . chapter 3 I really like your story, keep writing! |
 Klutz 2006-05-03 . chapter 1 This is very GOOD!!~
I like how the story is...The interaction with the master and he's 2 deshi's is pretty funny...,very enjoyable!!...but also Kenji kun is SO kawaii!!^_^...I hope you still continue and that ur doing a great job! Have fun writing and be Genki!
takecarez~
P.S
Is there a particular reason why the lil boy is named kenji?? |
 SaitouuRyuuji 2006-05-02 . chapter 1I thought this was really good, I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter as well as the rest of the story. Kenji is so cute :D.
~Saitouuryuuji~ |