very sweet, romantic and sappy but of course i ate up every word

That was fantastic... I always wanted to know what happened to Boromir if he had survived amon hen. Go romance and go Boromir!! You should write a sequel to this sequel.Yay!
Best wishes your devoted fan,
Saerwen xoxox

A sweet end to a wonderfully whimsical tale; I thoroughly enjoyed every page.

I apologize for being unable to review your last few chapters. School has been horrible and I am only now starting to catch up on any of the stories that I am following, having to go one a night. It is romantic how they both found love with the people they thought would never be able to love them. Elwen.

Excellent! Very nice ending...I knew there was something funky about Gwarth! Yea! I was right! *Does a little victory dance* Anyway, that was kind of a jerky thing of Eldarion to do...I would've wanted to slap him, too! I'm happy for all of the characters...It ended so well! Bravo!

The Editor of MBDTA

Thank you for updating! I pray for a speedy one this time! I get an awful feeling about Merenwen and Gwarth...I think they're involved in this elaborate plot to get revenge for Mardil...That's just me, though...

The Editor of MBDTA

Always shaking it up. Keep it interesting. Elwen.

Ho...you leave us on the edge of our seats. Elwen.

OOh...the Legomance! Is the dark-haired man Gwarth? Also, you have a way of giving the most excellent cliff-hangers! But, then you keep us in suspense for nearly two weeks! Please update much sooner!

The Editor of MBDTA

That was excellent! I liked the cliffhanger at the end! Update soon!

I am wondering what has the mom uptight. Elwen.

I must say I enjoyed the first half of this story, and also your earlier Moryth/Boromir fic. However, starting in this chapter, I'm afraid the story really went off the rails for me because I find the key premise so implausible.

As a parent myself, I just don't believe parents would let a child just up and leave to live with relatives under the circumstances. It's understandable that Moryn and Boromir were concerned about Lachiel's reaction, but they had to know the estrangement and resentment she feels about her father's memory loss would not just heal itself while she was separated from her family.

And as unlikely as it is that they would let her leave, I find it completely implausible that they would let her stay away for *9 years* without even seeing her once. That's just totally abdicating responsibility for their child, and that completely at odds with how you've portrayed Moryn and Boromir up to now.

At another level, I guess I don't understand why Lachiel had to be estranged from her family for the story to work. However, if you are determined that it is necessary, I would try to find another, more plausible way for it to happen.

Hm. I can't wait to see where this is going. I'm so happy that everything is mended...well, at least seems to be. What's this about Moryth? I guess I'll just have to wait.

The Editor of MBDTA

YEA! I'm so happy he has his memory back! Excellent way of revealing it. Hopefully you'll be able to update sooner and get this story going really good!

The Editor of MBDTA

P.S. Keep up the excellent work!

I am happy for them. Reconciliation(sp) is a wonderful thing. It is good that they were able to heal their problems instead of waiting until it is too late. Elwen.