So beautiful! _

Aw WOW... sweet, poignant, sad. Well done!

I...am...IN LOVE. *heart* This is awesome :3

This was beautiful. It made me teary-eyed. Great job with this :']

XD I loved this story, it was perfect on catching the characters and what can happen... Great story!

It was great :) I loved it! A bit sad, lovely and bittersweet!

beautiful :)

OH MY GOD! THIS WAS A TOUCHING STORY!

This story is really good. I can actually believe this what and how Sesshoumaru would be thinking if he were to be in this situation.

*totally adores this*

now i've got to go and look if you've got more like that :)

scarlet

I've read this, oh, a good five times before finally typing these words up. It is just that perfect. Perfect characterization, matched up with an great hook and storyline, makes this probably one of my favorites. This is exactly how I figure Sesshomaru's love, albeit an unconventional one, for Rin, and their relationship to follow. It would be bittersweet, yet perfect for him all at the same time. You did such a great job, I really have no other words to say.

that's me

ahhelga

aka Pauline

i love it

Bittersweet and well written. Interesting take on his deciding to follow her in death and his understanding of his father's decisions.

Powerful, insightful narrative. I really like the tone of this; the parallels drawn and how Sesshomaru keeps convincing himself he hasn't strayed from destiny until it's simply too late to turn back. Perfectly executed.

I'm speechless. It's a really good story, and Sesshoumaru IS Sesshoumaru in it.

Kind of sad and ironic but he accept that without any regret. So beautiful.