That was a seriously wicked awesome poem! I liked that part where you make fun of that guy from the original poem. But, I have to admit, when I read the first part of this, I thought you were talking about Xena, warrior princess! Like the TV show! Were you? Or was Xena some random goddess in greek history? I'm glad to know another Edith Hamilton fan... We are so rare. Your rhyming seems so effortless, so clean, it's almost like you wrote it yourself! Ok, like you wrote the ORIGINAL story yourself. I like how you got so much plot in, too. I'm going to check out the rest of your stories now, see if the're as good. TTFN, Ta Ta For Now!

That was wonderful. You combined Xena and The Raven extremely well. It's obvious you have talent so please keep up the good work!

Edgar was a very unique poet and writer, and though I Love the Raven, and have tried to write in his beautiful style, I never did so well as you have done here. Very enjoyable read!