I love it! Short, but very effectively written. Dean is the type to become a stalker, lol!

i like how you do it. Challenge... try writing a longer story (mutlichapter) following jess and rory and deans thoughts. either make it right have them sneaking around or something. Can you write jess and rorys pointsd of view good? jw.

Try it. im curious.

this fic actually made me feel bad for dean. he is usually the egotistic jerk, but he is just a human with emotional problems in this fic and i some how find that interesting. most writers always make him the bad guy, but you made him have really strong feelings in this fic and i thnk thats cool.