This is so cute! Martin thinking dirty in the last bit wa a bit unexpected. Nice job! Keep updating!

awesome...n are they getting a little naughty? o i like! ahaha...i hope u update soon! keep up the awesome work!

Sorry I haven't reviewed before this. I love this story, and I love that they are together now, in the way that everyone knows they should be. Martin was very sweet and protective, and it was good to see that. I thought Diana might push him away, and was glad that she didn't.
Post again soon!!

Really enjoyed reading this one.. not too interested in adult material following but I like where this one ended and hope you plan on adding more!

BWAHAHAHHA! The last part somehow reminded me of something ecchi!!

Otherwise, good work as always. Long live M/D!

I remember this story, its been a while.
well done though, the way you write makes everything seem more tangible and believable - the emotions between the two especially. Please consider writing more =) whether it is another chapter here or the adult version. again, well done really really well written.

The ending made me lol so hard!

I can imagine him being her slave to get that bath! xD

Too many to review seperately...>.< (or I'm just lazy)

Yay! for Martin/Diana fics! These are all very good and I enjoyed reading them. I'd go into detail but it's two a.m. atm...

But I think my favorite was the Caitlin bashing one. no offence to her, but I didn't really like her all that much anyways.

Keep up the good works!

Liz

erm...well, since their not really blood-related...

Anywho onwards to the comment!

Loved the first two chappies...I don't mind slow paced fics because if the writer is that good, I much prefer the slow but steady development of the characters and the relationships. ^__^

This is xtreamly good, great job!

good story

Loved it. Sorry my review is so late! Martin and Diana need to be together...and you proved it.

Beautiful, love your writing, please continue. Poor Diana, I just love her =)

i love it im new to the martin mytery fan fic side but i've always loved the martin/diana paring

this is great! I really hope to see more soon!