This was good, but the rythem was a bit off in places. Really good otherwise

Wow! I never really thought much about were Exotica was the whole time... I kinna always asumed she was one of Cassie's bubbies... I don't even have a nickname for her!

So beautiful, so sad.

Oh, this is so beautiful! It almost made me cry, too, to be honest. I like how you chose to offer us some insight as to what life may be like for Exoctica and how she might feel about her being rarely noticed. This is excellent for someone who hasn't written poetry before, and I'd love to see other poems you come up with about the other characters! Keep writing! :)

well, I'm not good at critiquing poems, so I'll leave that for others, though the rhyming scheme was a little off towards the end. But I think it was good! And alot of people forget about Exotica, so it's nice to see poems on her ^_^. Good job.

aww...that was beautiful!