That was a very good poem, especially for your first one. Good job with this fic. I always feel bad for Exotica, but she's not one of my favorite cats, so I don't care as much as I should. ;) I think you did a really good job capturing her feelings here. I liked it. :D

This was good, but the rythem was a bit off in places. Really good otherwise

Wow! I never really thought much about were Exotica was the whole time... I kinna always asumed she was one of Cassie's bubbies... I don't even have a nickname for her!

So beautiful, so sad.

Oh, this is so beautiful! It almost made me cry, too, to be honest. I like how you chose to offer us some insight as to what life may be like for Exoctica and how she might feel about her being rarely noticed. This is excellent for someone who hasn't written poetry before, and I'd love to see other poems you come up with about the other characters! Keep writing! :)

well, I'm not good at critiquing poems, so I'll leave that for others, though the rhyming scheme was a little off towards the end. But I think it was good! And alot of people forget about Exotica, so it's nice to see poems on her ^_^. Good job.

aww...that was beautiful!