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Marikalay 2008-11-02 . chapter 1
That was brilliant and amusing. I love your stories and am re-reading them all now. It is well worth the time.
Chaseha-Wing 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
lol, that's still the best ending ever.
passion8 2008-06-07 . chapter 1
Ha ha! Love this!
secondhandmemories 2008-05-30 . chapter 1
That was excellent! I love these kinds of stories. ^^
PerfectCell17 2007-09-25 . chapter 1
Hehehe... Wow, I think I almost died of laughter there. o_o;; That was so great! I have to admit my mind was a little in the gutter there... (Just for a moment =P)
venusserenade 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
Haha! That's good! Thanx!
StarDancer1234 2007-06-30 . chapter 1
Made me smile. =)
Hidari 2007-01-03 . chapter 1
Hehehe, yes you did. I almost didn't finish it. Good one!
Anna Jaganshi 2006-11-13 . chapter 1
lmao FUNNY! I remember alot of your stories from GREAT! But seriously, this one cracked me up, and when my mom read, OMG! LOL A B+... poor Kurama... ^^ Great mini fic!
Animefreak20006 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
That was good; you actually had me thinking other things. ^_^ (Yuki smacks Animefreak206 for having her head in the gutter).
Karen Kasai 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
Ha ha! That was hilarious! Perfect! lol. I loved it!
kiela 2006-08-03 . chapter 1
too funny!
Evil-Dust-Bunnie 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha I LOVED IT
Midnight-Dark-Princess 2006-07-13 . chapter 1
LMAO
oh that was good.
TheDemonQueen1 2006-07-13 . chapter 1
Okay, that was awesome! I loved it. You did a great job of making the reader think one thing and then it was totally not what the reader pictured. I would have to rate this story a major success! Ja ne!
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