That was very sweet. I liked the passion and the conflict.

-Ellie

...erm...I need to be alone right now.
Fabulous, so well written, you have an old-school style that's more than pleasing to the ear. And so erotic.
Baring in mind that it was based on the film rather than the cartoon, it was in keeping with the themes and attitudes in the film.
I love the writing style so much, it's, as 'I Love Edward' said, poetic. And oh so steamy. Love it.

This is, in a word, amazing. Poetic and perfect. Your writing style is wonderful. The was you craft these words is lyrical; inspiring. Not to mention a totally hot story. Very, very well written.

That is exactly the scene that that film was missing, and you wrote it beautifully. thankyou.

'mione

Hi,
I've just seen the movie on DVD...

Your story is very well written! I like it a lot!

Have you ever thought about writing the scenes from Trevor's point of view?

Keep up the great work!

great job

Like the other reviewer says, this is the first Aeon Flux fanfic I have seen written on ff.n, and I think it captures well the missing parts between the initial kiss scene followed by Aeon lying in bed next to Trevor.

This is the first Aeon Flux fanfic I have been able to find and I thought that it was really good!