Hi, I wanted to ask a couple of things about your story:

1. Lilly, Rose and Ashley are cousins right? Since they have the last name of Bell, they are in no way related to Katie Bell of Gryffindor, the chaser, right?

2. In my opinion, having three different diary entries in one chapter is extremely confusing. It would be much easier to read if you only had one character have a diary or somehow inter relate all of the girls diarys.

3. You should clarify how old the characters are. It is aggriviating to wait a long time for the story to update and then say 'they are eleven?!?!?! i thought they were fifteen!'

4. Describe who the girls are in the story, not at the bottom of the screen.

5. WORK ON YOUR LENGTH! This story doesn't go anywhere, and it has alot to be explained. Like all of a sudden, you mention one of them likes Draco, the other Harry and the last one Ron. It bothers me to read three OC's paired up with them. (But I am a biased shipper, I get really angry when Ron is in a story not paired up with Hermione, Harry with Ginny -or draco- and Draco with somebody)

well, I don't want to waste your time with questions/suggestions, I think I've said enough. Anyways, please answer my questions with a reply or anyway else. ( I know I'm demanding)

Can you tell me what happened to Hermione's son as he's the only one left after this.

Awesome story SeZ. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! sorry got a bit carried away there.

Bye Bye
-May