Beautiful. You have talent in writing! (: Continually improve yourself in language and vocabulary and you'll be able to write a novel someday (:

This is a beautiful story! I don't understand why it has so few review. Very sweet and touching. It's just perfect.

This was very good.

I can't believe this fic got just 2 reviews. This one-shot is just perfect, full of sentiment and very well written. I usually don't read much (being busy writing myself), but when I bumped into this story I couldn't help leaving a comment. This wonderful piece of work deserves all the reviews it can get.

Compliment :)

Good job, I like that.

I THOUGHT WAS THE SWEETEST THING I HAVE READ! IT WAS SO CUTE! I LOVED IT!GREAT JOB! IS THIS A ONE SHOT? I LOVE IT ANYWAY. WELL WRITE MORE!