It was beautiful and sweet and adorable! A cute little read that fit the series well. And don't worry about any little inconsistencies, I didn't feel any of it was out of place. (Not that I know too much about the Victorian era myself.) Nothing here was any more out of place than Hakim having a dot on his forehead.

I'm going to have to agree with everyone else... this was a great short story! I love the enviroment and conversation. It was only dificult for me to get the context of their meeting at first. It was never addressed that they were living under the same roof but not married yet to kiss infront of servents? I admit I'm slightly confused about that part. But LOVED the story and its detail!

K-kawaii!

Best (and only...) VRE fic I've ever read! :) Thank you for writing it. It was great. They were both perfectly in character, me thinks.

Only downside: No Hakim. XD Though, he probably wouldn't have fit into this very well. lol.

That was nice and in character. I could totally see that happening.

Ciao!

I think you did VRE justice for sure. This was a very nice continuation of the story. It's a shame there aren't many fanfics at all.

Wonderful short story about Emma and William. They are truly wonderful characters and the story of Emma was a fantastic change from the run of the mill anime we see these days.

Your story had great attention to detail and was very accurate. Fantastic job! I wish you had more Emma stories to go along with it.

Wonderfully done!

This was a delight to read and you captured the feel of the original story perfectly. Please consider taking us to that time and place again?

Sailor Doc

Wow. This is awesome. I think you did a wonderful job on this. This feels like it could easily be a part of the manga. Keep up the good work!

I loved it! I think the way you wrote them captured them quite well, I commend you for not overloading the story with romance, even going so far as to "deny" them a kiss. It all worked together to stay within their character.

Ohmygod, so glad to see another Emma fan! (I'm reading the American publications, so the "VR" part isn't there.) I

Extremely in character and extremely beautiful. The whole thing is decidedly graceful and a delight to read, but... darn your brilliant writing abilities! You've given me a terrible craving for scones. x3
Thank you.

Absolutely outstanding. I've never read such a well-written fic! BTW, i LOVE Emma. You capture the concept of the animation & story masterfully and i really wish you would write more! One question though: How did you get to achieve this style of writing? I MUST know your secret.. I'd like to improve myself :P

Anywho, kudos to the wonderful job! You're an excellent writer!

One Word: Lovely!

That was very sweet! I really loved it! I don't see any mistakes, either! I was nearly cying! Wonderful job! I'll be looking forward to reading your other works!

Mysteria Pearl

Ooh...It's nice and alright!
You really depicted the Victorian Era...
It's cool!