  strange pairings 2006-07-11 . chapter 1 um...
I really like the story, but um...
THE PAIRINGS ARE EXTREMELY WEIRD!
ok?
umm... I dont like the idea of sora and ariel together,
because:
1: ariel looks like a creepy lady.
2: im a crazed up fangirl and I prefer rikuxsora...
he... |
 oblivi 2006-07-11 . chapter 10yay! The first kiss! |
| Lady Anaia 2006-06-25 . chapter 9 *chuckles lightly* Vash makes an AWSOME older brother figure. xD The love and peace thing is soo fitting too.
Hee, I love the chapter. MERF! |
| Strickland-Propane 2006-06-25 . chapter 1 This is an interesting story; I like it |
| JusSonic 2006-06-25 . chapter 9 Another great chapter as usual. Plus, Sora, Riku, and Kairi are still pals. So what's next? Will we see Sora and Ariel get married? Things is getting interesting. Continue! |
| JusSonic 2006-06-15 . chapter 8 I did not know that. That's amazing. Great chapter. Will Sora get Ariel? Do I even need to ask? Go on! |
| oblivi 2006-06-15 . chapter 8 I like this fic a lot! |
| Ava 2006-06-04 . chapter 1 I love you...
IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A SORAXARIEL FIC FOREVER! |
| Lady Anaia 2006-06-04 . chapter 7 OOH! Vash! *tackles Vash*
Hee, should be a very fun fight! MERF! |
| JusSonic 2006-06-04 . chapter 7 Ar! This story be great, matey! (normal) Like my pirate talk? Mostly because of the pirate theme in this. Anyway, good chapters. Now that Sora knows Riku's here, things would get interesting. Sora vs. Setzer...can you guys say, "another big guy hitting on Ariel time"? Or was that over? Either way, great job! |
| TA_The_SunTwin 2006-05-28 . chapter 6 woohoo!Go armstrong and I glad that Gaston jerk get a good beating!poor sora looking down at his chest after seeing armstrong's and ariel is not off the hook yet with two players:
setzer and seifer. |
| JusSonic 2006-05-28 . chapter 6 Ouch. Man, Gaston's a jerk, eh? But at least he got what's coming to him.
Riku and Kairi is going to return? I smell trouble.
Cool chapter. Can't wait for Sora and Ariel to hooked up in the flashbacks! |
| oblivi 2006-05-21 . chapter 5 I loved that chapter! ^-^ Can't wait for the next! |
| JusSonic 2006-05-21 . chapter 5 Son of a...that's so cool! Sora's being a dad! I guess his kid is the next Keyblade holder, huh? (laughs) Anyway, great work! Can't wait to see more as well as see how Sora and Ariel got together and married. |
| JusSonic 2006-05-11 . chapter 4 Cool! I love this one. I can't wait to see more, of Sora and Ariel's first kiss, wedding, etc. It's very interested how you add non-KH characters (IM Edward Elric) into this. Good work. Say, check out my Sora/Ariel stories "The Little Mermaid: Kingdom Hearts Version" and "Sleeping Beauty: Kingdom Hearts" version right here:
I think you're going to like them. |
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