Yay you !

i just have to say that your story was amazing! it was so well rounded with everything happening at the right times and just brilliant overall!

Whu? Oh dear Lord, as Giles is going to say. That was strange and lovely and sad and that ending was so unexpected my jaw dropped through the floor. Somehow I just didn't see him killing her, no matter what. Amazing. OK, write something a little more cheerful or I'm going to want to cry for quite a while. Wow.

This was kinda sweet and kinda sad. Without the balancing influence of the rest of the Gang, I could easily see Dawn or Spike becoming that self-destructive. Good job.

great story, really enjoyed it!

Good effin' story! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time!

excellent story, im a little confused as to what typr of love Spike and Dawn had tho. All the same it was written so beautifully and put together so well that it seemed like an actual story mmore then a fanfic. *applauds*

Boy, did I ever like this story. I can't wait to read the sequel. Whenever you put it back up again, that is. Job well done Valerie.

That was great! You have got to have a sequel! PLEASE!

This is great! Write a sequel! Pretty plese with spike covered in chocolate sauce on top?

Great story _

Wow,ohwow,oh wow! That was a great story! Sad, but still great.

Awesome! I love Spike/Dawn friendship stories, and this one was really well written.

Very good tiny Valerie. I'm very impressed.

Wow! This story is so good, I can't wait to read the rest. _