It may seem that I am reviewing this late, but that is only because I had not read any of the FMA manga before this turned up on my author alert. Thank you for alerting me to the site that has it! Just this evening I finished it, and was able to read this fic.

I really like the idea behind this fic, and it is well-written. I think it would be great if you were to continue it. It has the feel of something with great story potential.

Once again, thank you!

Wow...that was depressing. Interesing to see where this goes. I hope you write another chapter!

Wah! Amazing! Beside Greed!Ling I likey Greed!Mustang better. E! I would love it if you would continue!

wait a sec!
dose this REALLY happen?
in the manga?
wa...(;_;)

note:I haven't read very far in the manga version [of FMA]
but i know i love royia [and this is a big upset 4 me that i brought(read) unto myself]
(;_;) -tear tear

Great story! I think that you should definately continue it.

i'm debating whether i wish it had ended with his notes or if i want to applaud you for making roy greed 2. However, if you're following the manga, then shouldn't Roy have become lust? (hehehe- that would have been funny but completely destroying the tone of the story)
either way, i liked it.

Wow, very cool.

Dude. That was perfect.

Mustang would have said all those things. You captured exactly how Mustang's reaction to all the death around him would be. A++ man!

OMG... i love it. Its awesome! you catched mustang's characteristics well. yup, a nice work.