aw... poor charlie!

i'm a fred/angelina shipper at heart, but i like it! =P

keep writing please!

I swear that this is one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. It's great! But why haven't you updated? This story has a lot going for it and I would just love it if you would write another chapter really, really, really soon!

Ahh...what a tangled web you have weaved! This looks promising, indeed. And I really didn't mean for that to rhyme, haha.

I do quite enjoy the thought of Angelina/Charlie and just the fact that he fancied her when she was 12 just makes this whole story more interesting. Also, what can I say? I'm a sucker for love triangles, I suppose.

Please continue soon! ^_^

What would it take for you to write the next chapter of this?! Holy moly, this was perfect.

More, please!

oh wow. I was skeptical about this at first because of their age difference but wow, I was wrong. This oneshot is truly excellent.

All I can say is WOW! This is a great beggining to what seems like a great story! Please Update Soon!

whoa.

hey i really liked this chapter. i'm normally a big fred/angelina fan but this story just makes me want charlie and angelina to get together and its only the first chapter. UPDATE! please write more soon!

I love this pairing. It's killing me that there's only one chapter!

Wow that was incredible

Wow this is great! Hope to read more soon. ^_^

wow...this is definitely an original pairing..good piece of writing tho.

omg!i love this..you totally dont give yourself enough credit...and there had better be another chapter coming soon..i will make sure of it.after reading this i think i am becoming a charlie fan..forget fred for now..charlies my new love!!ok well sorry this is short but i have to go do homework..i dont know how the whole chi thing is goign to work out bc prince albert died on me and is in the shop and i dont know when i am getting him back..hopefully tomorrow..but if i dont get him back tomorrow i might not be able to go to columbia bc i wont have a way to get me and ang there so i will figure it out somehow and let you know...btw that was really weird referring to prince albert as a him..first time it has ever happened:D...shnitzle out love!i LOVED this story!

This was so beautiful and it's definitely going on my favorites list. Is going to be a full length story? If so I would most definitely follow it. I love how Charlie and Angie JUST keep missing each other. It's so saddening but it makes for great material.

And their age difference back then...pity. They would've been great together if it wouldn't have made Charlie look like a pedophile. AMAZING job and I look forward to more!

There's going to be more right?!?