great story. ilove the labyrinth it is a great movie

Well, I got my happy ending so not ranting or threats! Not that I really expected an unhappy ending, but I have been wrong before...anyway, I think overall you did a really great job of taking the basic plot and recreating it to suit the different characters. It was very creative and well-done, and I enjoyed all the extra plot details you tossed in. Thanks for the entertainment, even if it is several years down the road from when you wrote it. I know you have lost interest in Inuyasha fanfiction since this was written, but if you ever decide to come back, I'll be interested in seeing what you write. Maybe corrupt another movie? LOL ^_~

Okay, still confused over all the rules of the spell, but otherwise that chapter rounded everything off nicely. I think in order to understand all the rules I would probably need to take a class on it, and that isn't going to happen, lol...the four I am taking are ENOUGH! So I'll just be satisfied with this and move on to see if I get a good, happy ending!

You know, I think that is the first time that I have ever seen Sesshoumaru described as a brat of all things! The mental image is rather funny, imagining him as a little spoild brat. Maybe pitching a fit...my humor loving brain is really getting carried away with that one, so I'd better move on before I completely lose my train of thought where the storyline is concerned...

Flowed along a little bit too much like the movie for my taste there, but still interesting, especially since Inuyasha is finally getting some time in the story! I am still rather confused by the entire thing, though, so I suppose I'll just have to see if the last chapters explain everything.

You know, for Sesshoumaru being an all-important demon, he surely had too much time on his hands to make up so many complicated rules. Well, in all truth YOU are culprit, but I'll ignore that for the sake of the story...^_~ My brain is straining to keep up with it all, and even now I'm not sure I completely get it.

Nice to finally be able to learn some of Miroku's background, and how Sango ended up as a servant to Inuyasha. Hopefully they will be reunited soon, and I can't wait to see what happens as they get to the castle!

Such a tangled web of good intentions and bad outcomes...Inuyasha, just as graceless as ever when doing anything that involves thinking things through! Not one of his strengths. Oh well, it makes for better entertainment!

Yes, I came back after having scraped by with barely an A on my exam (amazing, considering how little sleep I got last night, lol), so now I can read guilt free for the evening!

So Miroku is the traitor this time, hmm? I am interested to see where you go with this. Oh, and I am glad that Shippo has reappeared as he seems to be a good source of amusement in this story, along with Miroku's touchy-feely habits. As many fanfictions as I have read that play up that particular characteristic of his, it just never gets old! Gotta love pervy old Miroku...

Very creative use the biting fairies...who ever thought they would see the day that Miroku would kill off a bunch of pretty girls? Given, the pretty girls were no bigger than his fingers, but still...I didn't think Miroku had limits such as size...LOL

Still interesting so far, though I wish Inuyasha would appear some more. Even David Bowie got more airtime in the movie than Inuyasha is getting though thankfully he did get a slightly longer scene this chapter. Of course, David Bowie also spent whole scenes wearing disturbingly tight pants while dancing and singing...just the mental image of Inuyasha in a scene like that makes me torn between laughing hysterically and crying! I think I would be scarre for life if that happened, so perhaps I won't complain about Inuyasha's number of appearances after all...

I don't remember birds in the forest in the movie. There were those things that were able to remove their heads, whatever they were called...

Okay, yes, that guy was a bit...random...I spent the entire scene searching my brain for any characters that fit that discription, only to find out he wasn't anyone at all, lol...I bet you enjoy messing with your reader's minds, huh? Congrats, you attempt was a complete success!

Glad to see that you are incorporating others characters as well! An Inuyasha fanfiction is never the same without Miroku and Sango causing trouble in their own special ways...it is also interesting how you seem to have a crazy little eco system going on in that place...people grow in there and survive like plants? LOL

Ah, the classic gate scene. That always drove me crazy, because I could never follow the logic behind it. Ironic, because people tell me I am a very logical person! LOL Maybe it is because it is that "Alice In Wonderland" type of illogical logic again...

Anxious to see what happens to Kagome next while I can. Probably won't be able to finish tonight as I have to get up for a Pre-Calc exam at the college at ten o'clock. Ugh...I'll get as far as I can, though!

Interesting background story you have concocted. It gives Inuyasha and the setting a history that was really missing from the movie. And I LOVED the scene with Shippo getting caught out with his fake food...too funny! You are really managing to play out the story uniquely along with keeping the characters pretty well in-character. They aren't the movies characters just renamed like in so many fanfictions.