FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| vanorange 2007-06-18 ch 2,  | abuseBrilliant! I liked every line of it. Looks like the author has a crash for Pris - she is sometimes more alive than Roy! |
| Ldihawk 2007-03-25 ch 2, | abuseAnother excellent and exciting chapter! Your dialogue for the Replicants is well-written for both the male and female characters and never feels forced! The tie-in of the dove/bird at the end of the chapter(with the image at the end of the film) was also very insightful. You know the characters very well and it shows in your writing! |
| Angeldustedthatfreak 2007-02-27 ch 2, | abuseI love it!! Please make more! |
| Sigokat 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this...any more in the future? The descriptions of the characters and devling into Roy's feelings were very well done. It made you realize why they did what they did, but just like at the end, they didn't necessarily LIKE what they had to do. The only error I saw, and it was minor, was towards the beginning when Zorah called Roy by his last name, Batty. It has always been my understanding that the replicants always referred to each other by their first names...I could be wrong, because its been a number of years since I saw the movie or read the book. Keep up the good work, I'm going to check your profile for any more stuff. |
| Ldihawk 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuse"How can I be proud, I'm only what they've made."--Excellent! Your characters were extremely well fleshed-out and overall this piece was well-written and exciting! You found the right balance between the kind of primal quality, fierce intelligence and developing compassion of Roy Batty and captured Pris' sense of mischievous curiosity combined with her raw sexuality. Very well done! |