 Natta 2006-10-13 . chapter 13wow, this was a really cool story. I especially like the ending. |
 B.L.A. the Mouse 2006-06-02 . chapter 13 Wow. The escape was pretty cool (except for the Beka-taking-Flash part). And Tyr was really good to her over that... The epilogue, though... Still wow, but in a different way. I'm not used to sad endings! But very accurate to the 'verse. |
 prin69 2006-05-24 . chapter 13ok if that last chapter left me sad, this left me... just something really beyound sad. ^.^
so amazing, and beautifully written. hooray! |
 prin69 2006-05-24 . chapter 12are you TRYING to kill me?!?!?!?!?!?!
so i start off laughing at beka's comment's. and then it all seemed so sad, and pathetic. devastating really. don't break the reader's hearts! the last line, woah. |
 prin69 2006-05-24 . chapter 11oh, beka! i feel so sad for her. the muffin baker hating her, the man adoring tyr, tyr confusing her, and the woman with the sick child. so sad! and now flash! wow. you like your beka angst. ;) |
 prin69 2006-05-24 . chapter 10very cool! i love the end with tyr, and beka pausing for a moment. the pressure to leave with no maru to rescue them. and the political tension escalating. fabulous!
on a side note, i had finals this week and i gradute the weekend after next, so i had no time to even read fic! :( luckily, exams are now over so some of the pressure is gone and i can return to the wonderful world of fic! |
 B.L.A. the Mouse 2006-05-19 . chapter 9 Very cool. The bit at the beginning was alternately hot and amusing, and the cliffhanger is so frustrating! I'm waiting on the next chapter. |
 prin69 2006-05-18 . chapter 9i LOVE the chapter title. ^.^
this is an excellent chapter. poor beka, stuck in that position. and tyr is just confusing her even more! silly tyr.
tyr's switches in emotions are fantastic.
and wow, what a way to leave the chapter! |
 prin69 2006-05-15 . chapter 8Beka scoffed. “They’re going to try to fire on us in slipstream? They’re trying to fire on Beka Valentine in the slipstream! Ha!”
hehe. so beka. ^.^
lol. love the section about the place where they are now staying. aww, beka stole all the blankets. how cute! |
 B.L.A. the Mouse 2006-05-14 . chapter 7 Oh, so now what's Tyr planning? Sorry I didn't review earlier... I haven't been online much the last few weeks. If I'd realized this story was here, I'd have reviewed much earlier. |
 Shadow Stalker7 2006-05-14 . chapter 1interessting story. usually i read anime fiction this is the only the second non-anime fic i've read. i really like it. i've always loved andromeda. i was so sad when the ended the series.neway, cya. |
 prin69 2006-05-13 . chapter 7oh, tyr has a plan. can't wait to see what it is! |
 prin69 2006-05-13 . chapter 6Tyr, could you please rip this door off its hinges so I can go in and get some sleep?”
He peered closely at the door and ran his finger along an invisible line near one edge. “I’m afraid not.”
hehehe. ^.^
excellant chapter! |
 prin69 2006-05-08 . chapter 5o-oh. what IS tyr up to? |
 prin69 2006-05-08 . chapter 4yay! silent scare tactic. i love it. |