 Koi No Mega Lover 2008-10-24 . chapter 7wow! i really like this story, which is unusual for me since i've never been much of a YGO fan, but hey! ^.^ But ur story is really good. Please write more!
-Koi |
 RyaneNight92 2008-10-06 . chapter 7omg...update soon!
it's a fantastic story and ah i can't wait! *squel* |
 MusicalSoul 2008-04-27 . chapter 7This story is just perfect! I hope it won't end in tragedy! Please don't let it...I'd be very sad, even though it happens 9/10 of the time. >.< I love this story so much; please do update!
How could she forget? Her years at the palace must have been mind boggling... |
 MIA DRACONA MARVOLO 2008-03-14 . chapter 1this is a good story keep writing cant wait to see what happens next |
 SabakuNoGaara426 2007-11-26 . chapter 7love it! keep up the good work! |
 SabakuNoGaara426 2007-11-23 . chapter 5love it! |
 Aoi no Kaze 2007-07-08 . chapter 7Ah, your story has definitely caught my attention.
It was an interesting twist you added (making Kanika forget about Kuru Eruna and such). No pressure to update, 'cause I know how evil school is. |
 OnexLuckyxGirl 2007-01-30 . chapter 6Wow...just...wow. Really well written, and yes, this is eons late to be making a review, but *shrugs* better late than never, I suppose.
A suggestion for your next chapter could be to have one in Bakura's POV, and have him get a job as a guard at the (future?) wedding and just as she's about to kiss Atem, she recognizes and remembers him. And so she goes to Bakura instead. Have Atem be disappointed, but understanding, but the rest of the guards be homicidal. Then you can have them make a thrilling and daring escape.
Or not... That was just my wild, dramatic side coming out on a whim. *shrugs* do what you like, but I do hope you update soon. It'd be just a shame to see such a great idea go to waste.
~OnexLuckyxGirl~ |
 MalfoyRocks 2007-01-24 . chapter 7Please update! I really like the story so far, So PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE!...LOL. |
 Runelesca 2007-01-02 . chapter 7Wow I can honestly say that I've never read a bakura story quite like this and I can't wait to read more so please update soon!^-^ |
 MentalDeath 2006-11-27 . chapter 7... KAWAI! Please continue, I love Forbidden. It's one of the only good thief BakuraxOc stories I've read. |
 Delen 2006-11-20 . chapter 7 Please update! |
 Dark girl and Hiei's Girl 2006-10-25 . chapter 7Nice cant wait for more! |
 ShinRa Associate 2006-08-12 . chapter 7Update... Or... Um...
I'LL FEED YOU TO LEVIATHAN!
Yeah... that's it. |
 Higatsuku 2006-08-04 . chapter 7M...I like this. It's very well written, and I'm quite anxious to see Kanika's reaction. Update soon
PS: I'm Winged Kasai Kitsune, but I just recently changed my penname to Higatsuku. |