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Koi No Mega Lover 2008-10-24 . chapter 7
wow! i really like this story, which is unusual for me since i've never been much of a YGO fan, but hey! ^.^ But ur story is really good. Please write more!

-Koi
RyaneNight92 2008-10-06 . chapter 7
omg...update soon!
it's a fantastic story and ah i can't wait! *squel*
MusicalSoul 2008-04-27 . chapter 7
This story is just perfect! I hope it won't end in tragedy! Please don't let it...I'd be very sad, even though it happens 9/10 of the time. >.< I love this story so much; please do update!

How could she forget? Her years at the palace must have been mind boggling...
MIA DRACONA MARVOLO 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
this is a good story keep writing cant wait to see what happens next
SabakuNoGaara426 2007-11-26 . chapter 7
love it! keep up the good work!
SabakuNoGaara426 2007-11-23 . chapter 5
love it!
Aoi no Kaze 2007-07-08 . chapter 7
Ah, your story has definitely caught my attention.
It was an interesting twist you added (making Kanika forget about Kuru Eruna and such). No pressure to update, 'cause I know how evil school is.
OnexLuckyxGirl 2007-01-30 . chapter 6
Wow...just...wow. Really well written, and yes, this is eons late to be making a review, but *shrugs* better late than never, I suppose.

A suggestion for your next chapter could be to have one in Bakura's POV, and have him get a job as a guard at the (future?) wedding and just as she's about to kiss Atem, she recognizes and remembers him. And so she goes to Bakura instead. Have Atem be disappointed, but understanding, but the rest of the guards be homicidal. Then you can have them make a thrilling and daring escape.

Or not... That was just my wild, dramatic side coming out on a whim. *shrugs* do what you like, but I do hope you update soon. It'd be just a shame to see such a great idea go to waste.

~OnexLuckyxGirl~
MalfoyRocks 2007-01-24 . chapter 7
Please update! I really like the story so far, So PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE!...LOL.
Runelesca 2007-01-02 . chapter 7
Wow I can honestly say that I've never read a bakura story quite like this and I can't wait to read more so please update soon!^-^
MentalDeath 2006-11-27 . chapter 7
... KAWAI! Please continue, I love Forbidden. It's one of the only good thief BakuraxOc stories I've read.
Delen 2006-11-20 . chapter 7
Please update!
Dark girl and Hiei's Girl 2006-10-25 . chapter 7
Nice cant wait for more!
ShinRa Associate 2006-08-12 . chapter 7
Update... Or... Um...
I'LL FEED YOU TO LEVIATHAN!
Yeah... that's it.
Higatsuku 2006-08-04 . chapter 7
M...I like this. It's very well written, and I'm quite anxious to see Kanika's reaction. Update soon

PS: I'm Winged Kasai Kitsune, but I just recently changed my penname to Higatsuku.
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