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| Starshadow of the Tok'ra 2007-09-15 ch 18,  | abuseIt's a good story, fanofkdc. Good writing, certainly had me stuck in my seat til I'd finished the whole thing. A bit OOC in places but overall quite believable, actually. The subject matter - ah, fairly difficult one to write well on, but you managed to pull it off. |
| Rissa545 2006-06-01 ch 18, | abusewow! That was HAWT!! :) Amazing fic!! Thank you so much for writing it! :) Loved every bit of it! :) |
| lisab1986 2006-05-31 ch 18, | abuseGreat fic! I really liked the direction that you ended up taking with it. I can't wait for your next story to come along! |
| Dunedain Rose Thorn 2006-05-31 ch 18, | abusei LOVED THIS STORY!! i am kinda sad its over... :-( |
| odeepblue 2006-05-30 ch 18, | abusethat was truly amazing and eternally beautiful ! |
| odeepblue 2006-05-28 ch 17, | abusei loved this chapter ;) it was amazingly beautiful ! |
| Rissa545 2006-05-28 ch 17, | abuseWOW! Loved this chappie!! Pity thatthe last one will be the last one, but I guess every good thing has to end some time eh? Can't wait for it! :) |
| odeepblue 2006-05-26 ch 16, | abuseOH GOD! how sad :( i had my hopes up with that baby :( |
| Rissa545 2006-05-26 ch 16, | abusewow! Beautiful ending to the chappie! Kinda sad about the miscarriage (just to make sure, I'm pro-choice to, in case anyone round here cares)! Great cahppie all in all! :) Can't wait for the next one! |
| lolo 2006-05-24 ch 15, anon. | abuseYour story sounds a lot like a pleading against abortion IMO and is a bit OOC. |
| odeepblue 2006-05-24 ch 15, | abusei agree with u! i loved it, the way you frased the talk, the meaning you gave to each word... beautiful. a baby sounds fantastic, and he will be a great father... |
| odeepblue 2006-05-22 ch 14, | abuseabsolutely beautiful, i think is the best you've written so far ;) miracles do happen, my best friend lost 2 pregnancies, and then she had twins, lol... so it happens ;) |
| anneruhland 2006-05-22 ch 14, | abusetough subject great chapter. |
| dip-the-snowfish 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abusei like it. please update soon! |
| RattusLabRat 2006-05-11 ch 9, | abuseYou have to continue this! I'm hooked..no really i am! Damn you and this addictive fic! Keep up the good work. I'm loving it so far. Rattus |