Hehe, very funny. Making it a chapter could be fun, especially if they get bored again in different places, and others get involved, like Roy (suddenly imagines the 'missile' The Flame Alchemist would fire... short... lol"

This one was so cute! I love the blah, blah, beat that! haha, I like it! :D !

I like could you please explain the game
Over and Out
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Oh! I must see another Chapy!! *Grovels & begs repeatedly*

O! You should make this a story; just make it a bit longer and then I'll be on Cloud 9, okay? Awesome job, I hope you write more!

Misao-dono

hi hi!m^^m
wats sup? liked your stry i dnt fink that u can guess who i am though!Beat that

YO!
Haha! That was funny! I think you should turn it to a chapter story and get the other FMA people in on it. I'd like to see what they come up with.

FLAMETAL-_-

I think you should turn it into a story!

very Cute! There's just one problem, I don't think you noticed. When Ed and Al are playing in the beginning, you seem to be mixing up identies. For one at that point of the story al doesn't have a mouth to tape. And also the tradeing dialouge mixes itself up:
The short alchemist stared at his younger sibling.

“What do you want Al,” he asked (Ed)

“Blah, blah. Beat that” (Al)

Getting the idea, Ed said cunningly, “What if I taped your mouth shut huh? Beat that” (Ed, though suit of armor, no mouth)

“Rip the tape off. Beat that.” (Al, who doesn't have a mouth)

“Locked you in your room.” (Ed again)

“Picked the lock.” (Al)

“Got Winry to take your automail apart” (Ed says this!)

“Eep! NEVER!” shouted the older boy (howed we get this skip?)

just keep an eye on you stories

Too TOO FUNNY!

LOL My friend and I just had a conversation via e-mail(since I don't IM) that reminded me of
this story! Only we were threatening each other's favorite Naruto characters... But it still had
the same "Beat that!" dynamic. I think I won, actually. It's been half an hour since I sent the
last "Beat that!" threat, and she hasn't responded yet. I don't see exactly how you could make
it a chapter fic, but if you can, you should! Or I will kidnap the anime characters from your cupboard. Beat that!

LMAO! I love that game! You should keep going, Riza'd probably really shoot them if she lost.

Cute - I would. I wanna see what Riza comes up with.

I wouldn't

XD!! This was quiet funny!! Hahah I should play that game with my friend!!