This is such an awesome fic! My favourite parts are the first bit, Susumu smiling with his sleeve to his mouth and the end. But I couldn't stop smiling the whole way through!
Please write more! =]

That is hilarious! I really really love it,XD
you always managed to capture each person's characterization well,great job!

*can't stop laughing* That was the best ever!
You're an amazing writer.

LMAO so funny

It was so funny... I loved it.. I was laughing when i read the story..keep up the good work..:)

Hek hek hek! I love your Okita fics!

Loved it. Loved it loved it loved it. Especially the tutorial on invoking guilt! And the thought of Susumu sunbathing on the roof in nothing but his- I nearly fell out my chair laughing. Crap. I think I woke my husband up. Now see what you've done! I need my inhaler...

You're a pure genius!! This is really funny. I can't stopped laughing about it.. Make more, please...

YAY! I'm favoriting this, ir rocked! *grin* Just hilarious...poor Hijikata!

hahahahaha So funny!

Calling Okita a women... snickers

E soul thingy was rather lame, but still funny.

Can u imagine Harada acting innocent?

Poor poor Hijikata.

Mits b innocent look n smiles will be e Sinshengumi's near look...

hahahahahahahaha

wah! souji's clever comment about his soul was absolutely priceless! and then, the funniest thing i've read in a while: "Sunbathing, sir." I laughed so hard at that! I loved it. Souji is so cute and Hijikata is exactly in character. susumu smiling with his hand over his mouth- hee hee! and now I'm really in the mood for some red-bean mochi. m... ^_^

Ha ha ha!

Okita doesn't quite realise what he's doing to poor Hijikata!

An interesting and original story.

The humour is just priceless. Hijikata seeing Souji everywhere...like a nightmare...lol!

Loved it.

Ha ha ha! Original and funny! Powers of persuasion eh? ^_^

hehe, most amusing! ^_^

That was amazing! Wow I am totally in awe of you - best one-shot I've read in so long!