Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Help
Reviews For: Ashes - Reviews: Page 1 of 3
estiew2002 2007-05-10 . chapter 1
Absolutely amazing story. I just found it and once i started reading I couldn't stop until I finished all the chapters. Can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for all the work you have put in into the story and developing the characters. Please, please update soon
Aliengirla 2006-12-27 . chapter 39
A very good story with a very interesting storyline. It's clear that you've done a lot of work ahead of writing this to get it all to fit together.
The first many chapters are a bit confusing with all those people we don't know, but then they don't even know each other (you know what I mean...). But these last chapters put it all together very well.
You really had me scared in this last chapter thinking that Stevie had died. Then you had me thinking that it was all just something that Claire had dreamt, which made me believe you couldn't finish the story and made an easy finish. So glad that you haven't finished it like that.
All in all I really hope you will update soon!! You've done a great job so far...
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-12-08 . chapter 39
Nice chapter I hope you update soon.
NightStormBlaze 2006-11-18 . chapter 38
OMG this is such a good story. U have such good writing technics. I hope you continue because you left a cliff hanger.

Is this true parts of Stevie's life or is it made up?

Just out of curiousity are you Australian?

Night Blaze
Emsta 2006-11-12 . chapter 38
Oh God.

You do like leaving them in dire straights, don't you?
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-10-12 . chapter 37
YAY! Cool chapter. Forgive my weird mood, I haven't slept for a few days. LOL! Anyways, nice chappie I hope ya update soon.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-10-12 . chapter 36
(blinks) Nice chapter. I hopes ya update soon.
Emsta 2006-09-06 . chapter 35
Just caught up.

Didn't pick up Carrie was alive. Didnt' pick up Regan was Sue. Great story, feel sorry for Stevie, that she was in the shed when Jack died
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-09-01 . chapter 35
Great chapter. I hope you update soon.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-09-01 . chapter 34
Oh nice chapter. I'm gonna go on to the next one.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-09-01 . chapter 33
Nice chapter. I'll go on to the next chapter.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-09-01 . chapter 32
Um interesting chapter. I'll go on to the next one
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-08-30 . chapter 31
Awe I hope Stevee doesn't die. Oh and if you're gonn kill Daniel off can you make it messy please/ (grins) LOL! Anyways I hope you update soon.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-08-24 . chapter 30
Oh I hope you update soon. This was a really good chapter. Anyways like I said hope ya update soon.
Lady Blade WarAngel 2006-08-24 . chapter 29
Great chappie. I like it. I'm going on to the next one.
Return to Top