A fantastic read! I really liked seeing the story through the different member's eyes, I enjoyed Zetsu's unique perspective on the changes occuring. The ending is just a perfect ending to the less than normal group. XD

Lol, this is great and really well written as well.
Hope there will be more of this soon, as I'm really enjoying it.
:D :D :D :D :D


~Solus ;D

Begging your parson, but it's not "loosing", it's "losing".
"Loose" is when you need to tye your shoelace.

Oh. My. God.

XD HILARIOUS

Great Akatsuki fic!! Really captured the feeling of the group ^^ though quite a strange ending ^^; I loved it!

Wow! This is a really superb story!! The plot was thrillingly captivating and it gave me the shivers =D

But um...I don't mean to be rude...but er, in your summary, you mispelled "loosing", and it sounds like it should be "losing". Both are words in the dictionary, but it's just that "To lose possession of or be deprived of" is the definition of "losing".

Sorry for being picky! ^^;; Although I'm not grammatically perfect myself, I can't help but be stickler for mispelled words. I really am sorry if I offended you...

.. That image is just... traumatic... really...

storyline--1 point (coz its fanfiction...I have to take off two) writing--5 points (how do you WRITE like that? no fair.) emotion--2 points characters--3 points yay! 11 points! That means 'good' read...

XD I'm sorry if I seriously disturbed you by that, but I was testing out a random little rating system I was making up to do book reviews for a school thing...anyway. You are my current writing idol. Your writing flows so smoothly, so beautifully, and I don't care how 'secretly incredibly lame' you say you are because you're obviously not! well you might be incredibly ugly or something but that doesn't matter, you're obviously really intelligent and talented so that makes up for it.

*thumbs up* 3 stars!

GAWD.

I just can't imagine Itachi, Kisame, or, geeze, Zetsu being 'initiated'. It's just so _wrong_. And yet so hilarious. ^_^

LOL. Keep up the writing!

Who knew it would even be possible to make an organization like the Akatsuki menacing and yet hilarious, all the same time?! You continue to awe me with your wicked, wicked, wicked sense of humor!

HAHA!SERVES YOU RIGHT TOBI![Me hates Tobi]Nyuu!That was funny^^

Oh, my, god!

Cracktastic!

I especially love how well the story's originally serious tone set up for the WTF crack.

Oh my gosh, this story was so awesome!! At first it was so dramatic, and kinda sad too, because how could you not feel sorry for Deidara, or feel like Tobi was gonna get killed?... And then, that plot twist at the end, it was just perfect, the way you fit it in and all. So hilarious!! Wow, this is like my favorite fan-fic ever!! :)

Myahahah!! Wow, they remind me of the Anbu...

I love how you combine serious drama with utter hilarity. I daresay it's a gift of yours.