AloHa! Nice start there dude! I like that flashback. Holly must have her cheeks flushed crimson as she reminisced that time. Whe don't you change this from general to romantic eh?
Looking forwards to the upcoming chapters. Update fast... and I mean really fast. Busy days are approaching soon.
Keep up the good work mon camarade! ^_^ cool!

Great work. Love the story line so far can't wait to find how this turns out.

/:/1st female LEPrecon/:/