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Reviews For: The Tale Before Forever
Shaveza 2007-05-05 . chapter 1
So sad, but on another hand, it ended on a very content tone, despite everything else. I really liked this ficlet.
mushroomcloudslooklikebroccoli 2007-05-03 . chapter 1
Almost. YOu almost got it. I am almost crying. But this wasamazing. Sad...depressing...I just wrote an assignment for history just like that. Heh. Wow. I haven't used a single exclamation point...(is in shock)

TA TA FOR NOW!,
~Anna
Death's Soulmate 2007-01-13 . chapter 1
Wow this was really sad. Nice fic. I liked how you used Phantom instead of Fenton to give us a full range perspective. You really know how to put emotions and events on paper and evoke emotions from your reader. I'm recommending this story in the next chapter of Cursed or Unlucky. Awesome job.
Phantom SunsSong 2006-08-04 . chapter 1
... Worst possible scenario, I suppose. I thought anout it once, how Danny's parents would take it if he did tell them, or they found out. Definitely the worst possible scenario. Poor, poor Danny. Very sad, but very well written. As all your fics are.
powerruff1 2006-07-16 . chapter 1
I love this. It's deep and emotional, and makes sense. Awesome yet sad. Very, very sad.
Wingg-ed Wolf 2006-06-20 . chapter 1
Aw, that's really sad... Well writen but still very sad...
Inumaru12 2006-06-19 . chapter 1
Poor danny. but this was good.
animehpgurl 2006-06-04 . chapter 1
good fic.
phantomshadowdragon 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
*sniff* That was so sad. *sniff* I write morbid poetry on devaint but I'm still wondering if I should post my suicidal poem. I can't belive that Jack would shoot first and ask ?s later.
definenormalAB 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
wait who narrorated this? sam or vlad?
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