Well, I thought it was kind of cute.
Okay, there I said it, your story was kind of cute.

I like OOC, beacse it makes teh story...err, itresting!! if it's teh same charecter, you can get bored, but I like the Neji you portrayed!! Naruto's acting cute aswell!!

Hey not bad, but one thing, its not Hyuuga, its Hyuga. But its ur story, Great job! :)

^_^ SO CUTE! *cuddles fic* so freaking adorable! *gets extremely giddy and bounces around in a drunken-like state, giggling insanely* HERE'S A COOKIE! *gives you one*

love the fic, keep up the good work *grins*

... Don't stop writing- that's all i can say. if it's something you love to do, don't give up. if you gain more experience, and write more, and gain more confidence, people can see the difference- and you will, too! so don't give up- there are people who will support you, and never forget that!!

I love ice cream... Ahem, sorry. I was a bit carried by this mug beside me. (ICE CREAM! hehe) Anyway, i love this fic! I like the way you made Tenten smile a lot too! And purposes, whew. This is great! You included some NaruHina too, hmm.. interesting. i really hope you would not make this a one-shot though.. hehe, seriously, you should really make more! you're good... definitely one of my fave authors!

Peace Out!
Gangsta!

Aw...so cute! Make more! Is this done?

Aw...so adorable. You didn't make them OOC. It was cool. Very well written. *adds to faves*

Please don't hate yourself - it leads to health problems in the future. If you don't like what you've written, call it a stepping stone on the way to getting better. Personally, I think all your story needs is a beta reader to work out the grammatical kinks. And for crying out loud, don't worry about OOCness. Hello, it's a FANFICTION, we're all supposed to make alterations if it suits our purpose:) This is actually pretty good. Got a few grammar hiccups here and there, but nothing that makes it unreadable.

I love it and hey Neji was kind of gone there. But I don't mind. Nice story