i loved it. simple as that.

That was depressing until the end and there were a few grammar and spelling mistakes. The depth was intense and it made me think.

It was good, but not your best.

kinda confusing :S

This is a wonderful story, and here I'm assuming it's a one-shot. I can spew all I like about ideas, emotions, and beliefs and someone can come back and slap me in the face and tell me I'm wrong. But this talks about what she believes and how no one can change something that's rooted so firmly. I'm also amazed how you got it all out on paper. Well, not really paper, but the idea of paper.

This review didn't make sense, but oh well. I really liked your story so I hope this review counts for something.

That was good. Those are just such...human thoughts. I can't really explain very well, but it was just good. Plain and simple thoughts are always good to read, i guess.

Like i said in doomed, Its great to see more updates.

Love,
F.S.

oh, who's the one she loves and is going to ultimately kiss?? haha, i love this stuff, i hope that u intend on updating soon.

this a oneshot? i like it, if it is longer i will still like it, update soon.