Jesus Christ...!

Very, very interesting.

faved

...no words can describe this. You explained everything perfectly... the philosophy behind it was true to the point of horrifying...

That was awesome... I never would have thought that Gohan would be one to kill an animal, but you made it believable. This was well-written. I wish you would continue writing DBZ fics, but I realize that people outgrow things. Hopefully you still write as a hobby though because you've got talent.

Wooh. Powerful stuff.

Gohan's dark side is an aspect that's very seldom dealt with in fanfic, and even rarer is it done in a way that's this believable.

+fav.

Gee...very vivid...powerful...I probably should've looked at the rating before I read this...

beautiful...abolsutely beautiful

*jaw drops in amazement*
Wow...wow, wow, wow...

(is Zia)

That's slightly disturbing, but not entirely out there. I like it.

(y)

wow...that was good...

-O(^*^)O

Wow Ash, I don't know if I've said this before, but you are a master when it comes to writing.

That was SO freaky...but it was really good! The whole shark thing was a bit weird too...but what was even weirder was that I understood it...

Wow, that was hell good.

I LOVED IT! that was the coolest gohan story i have ever read!!!

Wow...