Perfect.Just perfect.Ya gotta make a sequel
-Laana.Laana 84



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Lets just do it my way.

Aw so sweet write another!

Meh...it was so-so it seemed a little rushed. Their isn't much point on giving critique on RaiKim considering you hate it and won't do it again :P. But I still love most of your stories and can't wait to see you continue!
Well, here's everyone's favorite anymonous reviewer (not really of course -_-') signing off, c ya ^_^

i think it's late to post here... anyways i loved ur story! u don't lie when u say ure good at writing n_n i wish i could write like this T.T i don't even deserve to be here =__=U
anyway, i'm a raikim fan, but i actually think that anything it's going to happen between them, never... that has only to stay in my imagination, sadly T_T
well, sorry, that didn't came up, right? ur story is really good though

sorry if i misspelled something, i don't write very well in english

oh yeah, to lyokowarrior: i think raikim will probably never happen either, since there isn't probably a season 4... i hope it happens, but i really don't think it will
( i'll kill myself if it does'nt happen o__oU... just kiddin')

It's not a bad story, not bad for someone who hates RaixKim, I can't figure out why you hate this pairing, it's obvious that they make the perfect couple. JackxKim, definitely not going to happen, and Kim doesn't have any interests in him anyway, I think it was episode six of season one, when he kidnapped her. He made his move on her, and she called him creepy, that's obviously a sign that she has no attraction to him whatsoever. But you have a right to your own opinion, but facts are facts, so live with it. If you open your eyes more you'll see that RaixKim are made for each other, they maybe be a bit different, but opposites attract, so go easy on the pairing, but I wouldn't count on it. Anyways, nice fic, even if you hate it, and I'm sure you had to stomach typing it. Good luck with future stories, but since you're not a RaixKim person, I most likely won't read any, no hard feelings.

PS. You're a hypocrite! LOL, just kiddin!

Dang, Rai's in character. I salute ya for that!

It's pretty good and rather realistic too. I mean, most RaiKims, when Rai kisses Kimiko, she just gets all happy. Here, she actually gets kinda mad at first. KUTGW...

Omi and Clay just happened to not be there where the 2 lovers finally expressed their feeling towards one another... I love those types of fanfics!

Well I like it. It's great but what paring do you support? Good job! Peace out to ya!

-XM

Aww...

that was very good. you should serouisly think of writeing more rai/kim stuff.

dat was so romantic! cuz its beautiful when u kiss sum1 u like under fireworks!

I think you just wrote one of those 'OOC Rai/Kim's you rant so much about. Average description, anyway.

hey this is lauren,
i do raikims and i came across yours and i really liked it
i dont think anyone should be so rude and say something like you being a hypocrite!
lol
so yeah like if u ever want to talk i.m me or email or even message me at

i really liked ur story.

well bye for now!
Lauren D.

aw dis is kute! yo shud rite moor raikims!