Defenitely Ed. That will make things interesting... I wonder if you will actually write it close to the way I hope you will, given the character. Probably not, I just want to find out. Good luck amiga!
~Rowan

Now that is a great story you have written so far and I can't wait to read more and more of it so keep on writing this story.

Nice way to end the chapter but I can't wait for the next one.

That was another good chapter that I have read and very intresting to boot. Nice one.

Nice chapter that you have written it was great to read.

That was a cool chapter it made me have chills while I read it all the way through it. Nice touch!

Nice chapter I can't wiat for the next one that you have written up.

another great chapter...and the little "this is what's coming next for chapter 7" sounds great! update again soon!

Eh? I think I called him a broom. ^^; But you also called him a broom in this chapter. *points* See, that is my super awesome mind control. *laughs*

Heh, Al saved the day. He's so underappreciated. I had the sudden mental image of Ed brandishing a butterfly net at a snake man. Actually, Voldemort from Harry Potter came to mind. I thought I was going to hyperventilate. ^^;

And then, of course, 'Pass me your head.' Really, I haven't laughed so much during a story in a while. Artemis seems very edgy and angry. Hmm. Ed isn't the only one interested in Serena? Ehh?

*grabs Ed and shakes him* You have to go and get Serena before some other loser comes along! ^^; Don't mind me, I'm just being my usual loopy self. I can't wait to see what happens with Jadeite. Not to mention this intriguing new book that Artemis so thunderously delivered.

I loved this chapter too, please write more soon! ^^ I will be stalking. *stalk*

and the plot thickens! wow, this story is really great, please do update again soon!

GOoD PLEASE UPDATE. WILL THE OTHER HOMUNCULI BE REVEALED?

Oh, I love getting review replies. ^^ You definitely didn't bother me.

Poor Serena, everyone is hiding things from her. I know I would be equally upset, probably more so 'cause I like knowing everything. ^^; But wow, Chimera. That's really sad. You capture Serena's character well, too. ^__^

I won't lie, I did almost cry after Serena started crying. And then I burst out laughing when I imagined cat Artemis hissing at a newspaper brandishing broom. And then again at, "Without a plan and big grins on our faces." ^^ I'm glad you've brought humor back into the story. It distracts from the heavier subject matter, which is a good balance I think.

Another wonderful chapter. I hope to see more of this very soon. The Break-In? That sounds bad. =0 See you next chapter! ^^

Can't wait for more!

Watz poppin? Luv ya story update soon kay!

Hello there! ^^ I've been reading this since chapter two, so sorry for not reviewing sooner. I'm a bad reviewer, I know. Anyway, though, I want to tell you that I adore this story! Fantasy is my favorite genre to read, watch, etc. so you've really got me hooked on this.

I feel really bad about what happened to the fairies and Usa's mother. There's a way to revive the fairies though, right? RIGHT? (hyperventilates) You capture Ed's character really well, too. ^^ He's so funny.

Hooray for Luna and Artemis! I love those darn cats. I ramble a lot, sorry. I really do love this story and hope to see more soon. ^^ I promise to review from now on, too!