PleasepleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE continue!! This story is awesome!

That was fantastic.

I loved it, keep writing!

I really enjoyed this story. Pietro is my favorite character from Evolution besides Rogue. Anyway, (and I'm trying to word this nicely) could you please consider a follow-up or sequel? Unless you have one and I just haven't found it...please? It was really, really good and more would be wonderful.

Se. I reviewed. Naw, just kidding. Great story!Plz cotniue!

omg I loved it poor poor Pietro

Hi, please update your story, for me!? Please? :( It's really good, and you're extremely talented. Please? :(

Dunno if Pietro is doing the right thing... *shrug* Prolly Lance is going to figure it out...

I am utterly speechless. Saying its awesome doesn't even seem to do it justice. All I can say is...KEEP WRITING!

brilliant story!

^_^
rereading stuff on my favorites is so much phun

Very good, I hope you update soon...I'll be reading.

LOOK, YOU HAVE TO HAVE MORE! YA SEE AFTER I READ THIS I COULDN'T REMEMBER WHERE I HAD FOUND THE STORY! SO I'VE BEEN TRACKING YOU DOWN FOREVER! COME ON! THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE BEST THING I'VE EVER WRITTEN! PLEASE!

cool. Pietro! my goodness...Magneto's an old fart. a MEAN old fart.
please write something else!
icing :P

WRITE MORE!!
THAT ROCKED!!

i like it a lot
i would have reviewed on the first page but my computer has a personal vendetta against me
write more
i like how you set up the scene without using too many words