Dark, and strange, and absolutely GREAT!

Very impressive.
I loved the ending. It was unexpected... and very well done.

Wow... intense... well-written!

What a sad ending... However so in character... Nice work.

Whoa...impressive.

Woo-hoo. I remember when you were emberassed to write a vague rape scene!

Really cool idea. I love your twisted mental insight pieces.

You know what I've noticed? You use the word saccharine a lot in you DN fics, I like it, it's like a 'Where's Waldo?'.

Whoa. Awesome twist. I definitely did NOT see that coming, and it suddenly throws the "sickly sweet" smell into startling sense (that was some intense alliteration, there, for a review).

Wow. Wonderful. Thank you.

Wow... that got quite a reaction from me...

Very well written. It was so in character that when Near woke up I was seriously very disoreinted for a moment to figure out what was going on until I could figure it out. Very, very, well done. You're an excellent writer. You should be proud.

Ah, I love getting alerts for new DN fics from you. :p Wonderful! Love the contrasts and emotion of it all - and the fact that it shows Mello and Near aren't quite as different as they might think. :)

That actually scared me. Not that it was bad, but I had to repress a shudder. It was...compelling? Eh, I'm having a word shortage. But it was amazingly well done.