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Sjorsie 2008-11-29 . chapter 4
Hey nice story! i liked chapter 4 most. so coud u make more of those? cuzz i didnt really get the first 2...

anyway, keep going!
ihatewriting 2008-08-03 . chapter 4
write more!
opEd-girl 2008-04-17 . chapter 1
Really liked it. I love this pairing as well, and find it incredibly hard to write about them.
xxguesswhoxx 2008-03-07 . chapter 4
wait so shikamaru didn't have to be there but he was?
dawnblossoms 2008-02-28 . chapter 4
Ok I liked this one as well :P You are an AMAZING writer and I love your writing!
PS. Dont worry, I think ur ShikaTema fics are awesome.
animefan28 2008-02-25 . chapter 4
Are you going to continue this or is it really complete? I love this couple by the way! :)
violaqu33n 2008-02-21 . chapter 4
good
good
me likey
oh shikamaru, i'll save ur poor ears!
keep writing! u'r good at this!
anonymous-lemonade 2008-02-21 . chapter 4
Just because your stories are well written does not mean it's boring! =D I love reading all of your drabbles; each of them has its own voice and purpose making it enjoyable and entertaining every time. I love your writing style and, to be quite honest, I think that this piece was one of the best. ^_^ Keep up the amazing work. PLEASE!
darkgal666 2008-02-21 . chapter 4
Love this as much as thr other 3 chapters!
xxguesswhoxx 2008-02-04 . chapter 3
lolz Gaara found her underwear XD
violaqu33n 2007-11-27 . chapter 3
extremely crackish
i like it
Aiko110 2007-11-23 . chapter 3
LMAO! Shikamaru was all relaxed n everything the entire time! XDD

But he's so screwed now! GAARA'S GONNA CRUSH HIM! XDD
Mungo 2007-11-04 . chapter 3
ROFLMAO!
All three were awesome! I love ShikaTema, and I really enjoy it when I can "hear" their voices while I read. You nailed them. Great job!
LULU.BAZUKU 2007-08-10 . chapter 3
hahahahahahaha! i love this!! good job!
jayme 2007-07-16 . chapter 3
wow she DID him. lucky **
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