:D i love how you've done the dialogue in this scene!

THE STORY WAS TO GOOD I JUST WANTED TO KEEP ON READING PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS.

LOVE CHAPTER 2! you should really continue it.

Hey nice story! i liked chapter 4 most. so coud u make more of those? cuzz i didnt really get the first 2...

anyway, keep going!

write more!

Really liked it. I love this pairing as well, and find it incredibly hard to write about them.

wait so shikamaru didn't have to be there but he was?

Ok I liked this one as well :P You are an AMAZING writer and I love your writing!
PS. Dont worry, I think ur ShikaTema fics are awesome.

Are you going to continue this or is it really complete? I love this couple by the way! :)

good
good
me likey
oh shikamaru, i'll save ur poor ears!
keep writing! u'r good at this!

Just because your stories are well written does not mean it's boring! =D I love reading all of your drabbles; each of them has its own voice and purpose making it enjoyable and entertaining every time. I love your writing style and, to be quite honest, I think that this piece was one of the best. ^_^ Keep up the amazing work. PLEASE!

Love this as much as thr other 3 chapters!

lolz Gaara found her underwear XD

extremely crackish
i like it

LMAO! Shikamaru was all relaxed n everything the entire time! XDD

But he's so screwed now! GAARA'S GONNA CRUSH HIM! XDD