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| Paintball Willie 2008-07-08 ch 17,  | abusekeep writing this one likes your style |
| 32ndmir 2008-07-02 ch 5, | abuseI am forced to admit, this is one hell of a story. It does touch on keen issues though when it comes to warfare, such as racism and a sense of how rookies don't seem to last too long. -_-' |
| Garuda 1 Talisman 2008-06-08 ch 17, | abusethis story kicks ** |
| Demon Lord of the Round Tab... 2008-05-24 ch 15, | abuseFellow Navy boy, eh? Who knows, maybe we'll be on the same ship some time. As for the story, damn its good. I think your idea of making Blaze part Belkan really adds something to the storyline. Wonder how much flack he'll get after Belka gets involved. lol. |
| Hremsfeld 2008-05-22 ch 17, | abuseHoly crud! Once again, you fail to disappoint! If all the next chapters are as good as this one, take all the time you need! (Provided you don't run off for eight months again ;)) As for the prequel: do you mean set during the Belkan war, or between the wars? If it's between the wars, what would be in it? Obviously, revealing the whole plot now would be dumb, but is it something like the fighter jet equivalent of Black Ops starring Capt. Bartlett, or what? |
| Kartman 2008-05-17 ch 17, | abuseHeh, shouldn't that be chapter 17 at the top of the page? Anyway, good as always and I'm really happy to see you've come back to working on this. Been about a year now. |
| Archaic flame 2008-05-17 ch 12, | abuseVery good story, welcome back. I look forward to reading the rest. |
| major wallace 2008-05-10 ch 17, | abusenice |
| Vetus Animus 2008-05-04 ch 17, | abusenicely done. the chapters are short, frustratingly so. but if you need to keep them short to keep up with updating then whom i to complain. |
| Akira Stridder 2008-05-03 ch 17, | abusewow.. |
| Infinite Freedom 2008-05-03 ch 17, | abuseAm I the only one who wants to wrap those generals and the colonel in bloody meat and throw them into a tank full of large, hungry Great Whites? |
| Pixy Black 2008-05-03 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter. Your writing really makes people able to relate to the characters. Update soon. |
| Kit 'Kitsune' Soldat 2008-04-22 ch 16, | abuseOh my god! You're back, happy! and I been waiting for this chapter for such a while |
| TheBlackCabbit 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, thank god... ur back! XD i LOVE this game and ur story is a perfect complement to the game. I had wanted to write a fanfict for AC5, but u have meh beat. XD i hadnt thought of Blaze like u had and when i think about it i fits. Keep it going till u finish or you'll make lots of ppl VERY mad! XD |
| flyingdoomperson 2008-04-16 ch 16, | abuseThank God your back! this is a great fic and i had almost given up hope of ever seeing it updated. please post more, this section needs authors like you to keep it alive! |