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Reviews For: Spring Thaw

happyhooligan2001
2006-09-01
ch 1,
abuseYes, Jack and Chloe have to be cold. They sometimes have to do some awful things and emotions just get in the way.
Goddess of the Fiery Goblet
2006-05-21
ch 1,
abuseo...me like... cold..hmm...good way to desrcibe Chloe...I had never thought of it like that. oh and jack didn't cry!
scrawling purple ink
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI love how you did that melting anology. That was ingenuous...a very good drabble. I like it.
erica1531
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abuseOh, god. This was unbelievably well done for such a short piece. Beautifully apt and concise analysis of both Chloe and Jack. Short and powerful is rare, but really good stuff in the fanfic world. Loved it.
Claire M C
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was brilliant! I loved the comparison between Chloe & Jack and the entire idea of them being frozen because they have to be. Fantastic!
thecrystalkey
2006-05-03
ch 1,
abuseInteresting choice of metaphor (simile? - I never could remember which was which), but I like it.
I like the whole thing, especially the last two lines. So very true. Good work.
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