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| happyhooligan2001 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseYes, Jack and Chloe have to be cold. They sometimes have to do some awful things and emotions just get in the way. |
| Goddess of the Fiery Goblet 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseo...me like... cold..hmm...good way to desrcibe Chloe...I had never thought of it like that. oh and jack didn't cry! |
| scrawling purple ink 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI love how you did that melting anology. That was ingenuous...a very good drabble. I like it. |
| erica1531 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, god. This was unbelievably well done for such a short piece. Beautifully apt and concise analysis of both Chloe and Jack. Short and powerful is rare, but really good stuff in the fanfic world. Loved it. |
| Claire M C 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant! I loved the comparison between Chloe & Jack and the entire idea of them being frozen because they have to be. Fantastic! |
| thecrystalkey 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting choice of metaphor (simile? - I never could remember which was which), but I like it. I like the whole thing, especially the last two lines. So very true. Good work. |