I believe Australias capital has always been Melbourne (it was much more developed than Sidney at that time...) even if I am no specialist, and it was after all somewhat complicated back then, with the different states.
Apart from this, I must congratulate you. this story is amazing, and has a good plot that is well served by your flawless writing. Congrats

that is so awesome that your fanfiction this fanfiction is getting published :) I can't believe I actually read what you wrote in B&N...lol
I really enjoyed your book, I hope to read more from you. :) Like seriously. :D

this seems very similar to a book I just bought and read: The Darcys and the Bingleys. Almost exactly word for word. Have you read it?

Your writing made me like Jane and Charles more ;)

You have a wonderful writing style and a wicked sense of humour. I keep getting strange looks for laughing at random while sat at the computer! I have read A bit of Advice and this in two days. Fantastic! I will be reading the sequals over the next few days.
KAHPfan :-)

i apologize for not reviewing for the past chapter, but the last moment with Geoffrey saying Darcy's name like that was hilarious! great job

i just read all of it in one night. phew. amazing read. way to keep the plot going!

i shall now attempt to make my way through the other series.

Your stories are surely going to be the end of my education, as I will probably spend the next nights reading your amazing series. At first I thought they were short stories, but no! They're like novels! I'm astounded and enthralled that you have such an endless abyss of creativity and skill to write so much, and write at such a fast pace! I think you have some secret that cures writer's block. You must share. haha No but seriously, it's been an absolute joy reading The first two stories of the series...and I definately cannot wait to read the next few!

love the witty repartee! (lol, is that redundant?)

best wishes and good luck on your book, i'll definitely buy it if i find it in this part of the world.. XD be sure to post the name you'll be using! just in case you decide to use a pseudonym..

btw,do you study old english lit? i have no idea how to make characters sound like that.. could you give tips? XD

bravo!

Wonderful! I love the humor!

I LOVE your stories! You do such a great job with the characters and plot! Great job! :)

Just finished this marvelous sequel to "A Bit of Advice."

I have to admit that your Darcy is my favorite out of all the P&P fan fiction I've come across.

The whole Scottish v. English tension thing rather amused me since I'm reading this in Scotland, and frequently hear their side of the story. :)

HILARIOUS!

*gasp* what?! you've got to be kidding me! the coward!

hehe cute! that last part was especially amusing.