Originality: 8.5/10
Plot: 8.5/10
Entertainment: 9.0/10
Grammar: 7.5/10

Possible Improvements: A few grammatical errors, probably typos. Nothing really big.

Comment: Through my explorations through database, i've found a few of these, and grown to like them. It is an interesting insight into both the authors perception of a character, and if the author is good, a view into the author themselve, and their values, attitudes and beliefs. At first I thought this was going to be s dark and gloomy fic, another patch of darkness in the night, to use a metaphor. But you turned it around magnificently, and I was pleasantly surprised.

^_^ it was well written and made me smile. i liked it a lot. you did a good job, portraying what naruto would feel like. continue writing!

-Gwen-

That was cute! *NCB*~

Yup, I enjoyed it very much!
:p

Great story, Alex, NOW UPDATE THE OTHER STORIES, or heads will roll.

Kawaii!

That was awsome! That was cool the way you added in the song. I own lots of Naruto comics, as you can tell by my pen-name. I'm new, so I won't be making a movie for a while though. I really enjoy Tales of Symphonia, Hikura No Go, Code LYOKO, and some others. I hope we can talk again.

Nice. I like it. Good job!

B-E-A-UTIFUL!

a excellent story, thank you for not making sasuke the "Angry guy who doesnt give a ** about anyone else.".

Its nice to know that you have captured that there is a special bond between all four members of Squad/group Seven, :)

Yokuka969, Amatuer writer.