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| killer7 2008-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so sad write more i beg of you |
| Charlie McCloud 2007-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it. Screw Euctyce |
| Sk8er765 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abusegreat job again! your really good at speaking eustace language |
| fortunatexfool 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseGah, Eustace makes me sick.. *sticks out tongue* Wonderfully heartwrenching epilogue! I must favorite this as well. |
| badwolf1 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGood epilogue, Cindy really is sorry about what she did. |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abusePretty emotive epilogue. Excellently written. Keep the good writing. |
| Hawk-EVB 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAww...That's so sad! T-T Good, but sad! ~+~+~THIS is SAD~+~+~ |
| theanimequeen 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseso sad but if i was cindy i personally probably would have hurt eustace more than she did! anyways excellent story and the ending was sad but at least jimmy heard her apology. please continue writing!! :) |
| Piano Prodigy 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you ended this making the reader think about it, was it Jimmy or just the wind she felt on her shoulders, good ending. |
| Soldier of Darkness 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* Damn you, you made me cry at the end...you're so evil! |