Oh my gosh!! It was so freaking hilairious! I love the part when the dude's twitching!

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U R MY FAV WRITER THAT I KNOW IN REAL LIFE NOW! U MAKE ME LAUGH EVERY TIME! LIKE NOW!! I'M LAUGHING HYSTERICALLY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...*breath in deeply* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HA! Okay... me done now...

Insanity is great for those who now how to use it. Buy it at a Target near you!!

~Twitchy~

one question: what did you two do with all the bread? oh and Bob wants to know if you could send him some whole wheat... whole wheat? nasty. anyways amusing... i would probably have 'gotten' it more if i knew the commercal in question but there you go lol

it was great... now i'm off to read the other two.

Funny story! I agree with ravengal. Were you hyped-up on sugar when you wrote this? I love it! I'm going to put this story on my favorites!
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*rolls on floor laughing* O-kay... Now, tell me. Were you,like, incredibly hyped-up on sugar when you wrote this? Coz, like, it's totally insane!

I cracked up at the end though when he fell on the floor and started twitching and screaming like a maniac.

Beware the freaks.

hah i make 18! yea! and the annoymous block is enabld so random lazy people like u and maih can review! oh crud, I am on your thing, so it is you sening a review to u through me... SORY I AM LOGGING OUT KNOW!! hahha this is the first review. AN YOUR STORY IS SO AWSOME IT PUTS ALL OTHERS TO SHAME!! IT'S BRILIANCES BURNS WITH THE WHITE HOT INTENSITY OF A THOUSAND SUNS!