Wow, I really like your style of writing! I love the way you word things-very descriptive and kind of poetic! Keep up the good work!

Hi, Tempo! I'm Corinna from YTDAW and I KNEW I recognized your name from somewhere. I'm glad your muse is screaming Bones because I'm in dire need of some really good Bones fanfic and your fanfic is relly good. (Isn't it nice how that works out?) Sadly, it's also really short. Which means that this is me, writing you a review in order to coerce/pressure/encourage (whatever floats your boat) you to write more and longer fics! Please? Ice cream sundae with a Booth on top?

I wouldn't have minded reading about "the event itself," but luckily, I DO have a good imagination. :)

Aww! I liked it! It was really good.

pagan-seijou

Loved the first chapter!

pagan-seijou

Wonderful. I loved how you wrote it. I like to use my imagination. Thanks for posting it in 2 parts, I got to think longer - and that is always a good thing.

I do like how you skirted around actually saying what happened. Makes the story very unique.

A rather excellent vignette (though if us readers had imagination, wouldn't we, ourselves, be writing?). Well done!

I liked part 2 as well. I loved how you implied certain things.

~wolfy~

Oh...I like part one. You nailed it about paper. It's just something about pen and paper...

~wolfy~

Great first chapter...

I love it! :) A little confusing at the start, but other than that - perfecto!

WHAT?? FURBYS HAVE A FREAKIN OFF BUTTON? AH!! do they hide it under the evil fur or something so you can't find it or what!? ok, great chapter. so, here's my imagination: left the book out, booth finds it, reads it, writes in his own little part including an invitation, they go out for dinner, confessions made, woo!! cept it would be more complicated than that, but i have limited space here. not space on this, more like attention span problems. oh well! thanks for a great part two! -ash, whose attention span is now zippo

yay, you did follow it up! i liked how you didn't use the expositional statements and left it more open to interpretation, it's always interesting to read something like that! Great job with this!
Ava

Very nice piece of writing, I enjoyed the style.