Cute. Short too, but I'm not complaining THAT much.


I'd kind of like to here more of a story, but I don't blame you if you just leave it as it is. Sometimes you just need to write a short and simple FF, that way more people will read it cause they have time to, like me.

Was Raven sad when he wrote this? It kind of makes me think she was, and BB had caused her sadness. That would imply me to write something like this to someone.

Anyway, nice letter, you generate emotion really well. You could make another BBRea oneshot (I R&R'ed the other one), but make it a little longer and add detail. Maybe you could write a story that had BB giving Raven a note at the end or vice versa?

Just some suggestions because as a reader I like to read some kind of a story.

But the note was really cute, you get some, okay, a lot, of points for that.

Thank you for reading my review. Later.

Aww... Go Beast Boy. Man, if I were in Raven's shoes at that moment, I'd be totally thankful and happy and I won't care if the things around me break.

Sweet. ^__^

Short, but nice.

Keep the good writing.

Zero reviews eh? Well I'll change that by being the first o review your story/note-thingy. Yay! It's short, sweet, and to the point. Plus it's really cute. I give it a thumbs-up!^_^